Eeee wow, that's so awesome! You go right with the flow of the canon, and, as I was kinda disappointed with the bit after the credits because it seemed so cliché, I really like what you turned it into - the travels, the constellations, the adventures, all those different places and atmospheres, the time going by, William growing up, them seeing each other occasionally and all the tension that, even though they try to relieve it and put it into activities, really only vanishes when the curse breaks. Lovely ideas and characterization, darling. ;)