ext_10290 ([identity profile] poisonapple73.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] nekare 2007-06-23 05:57 pm (UTC)

Thank you for this story. I have some real issues with the way canon left Will and Elizabeth, so I was uncertain about how I would feel about post-AWE fic for them. You handled their story beautifully, and made the resolution they were left with suit their characters. I love all the various character moments you've included, and the way you hit upon my favorite things about Will, and Will and Elizabeth together- his respect for who she is, and they way they fight together seamlessly. I also liked your world building details- your description of the dragon Elizabeth sees, the fountain of youth being underwater, etc.

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