I'd been having a really bad morning, and then I see this fic and suddenly my day is better! Martha is indeed >>>>> everyone, and you certainly have managed to write her as such! I particularly loved her running into the office building to save the world, and causing the Doctor to go "Guh..." over her supreme awesomeness. Donna's phone call was also excellent, and if next season doesn't see her using the words "evil ex boyfriend" I will be exceedingly disappointed ('cos how much of a Donna thing to say is that!!). Your portrayl of the Doctor is just so needy and so perfect, and I can just so see all of this happening (particularly the biscuit stealing). I also adored the less pure fun parts, Martha seeing people from the year that never was, the Doctor trying (and failing! You go Martha!) to break up her date ("we're not pets" = best line ever), their getting flooded and subsequent fight (and subsequent make-up ice skating!).

Basically, it's early in the morning and my brain doesn't have all its higher functions yet and if I keep going through the bits I loved I'd end up just paraphrasing your fic back to you and that would be lame, so I'm going to shut up now!