*dies* This was aweful! Why are you doing this?
You're breaking my heart. :(
Well in a good way because I love your writing and the plot is amazing.

Again and again I adore your way to describe the weather - the cold outside and inside. *shivers*
You finally kicked Lily inside this game of revenge, sacrifices, love and youth. And this girl kicks asses - I know it. *smirk*

The conversation between Sirius and Regulus was creepy because they're still brothers and there's still kind of a bond but at the same time there antagonists. You made that perfectly clear.

Sirius grits his teeth, counting to ten in his head, trying to calm his temper. He reaches twenty-two, and he speaks again. “Look, you asshole, I’ve no time for your shit.” Regulus doesn’t look impressed. Instead he looks vaguely amused, an eyebrow raised in that gesture that annoys Peter so much when Sirius does it.
One of my favorites! They're brothers and rivals and omg I love them. *lol*

I want to smack Remus. Trying play be the hero with taking revenge.
You're so stupid, Moony! Just get happy with Padfoot. *g*
“I won’t let you do this, Remus. I will not let you lose your life over a stupid wish of revenge!”
*cuddles Sirius* Really sweet. :)