posted by [identity profile] mikou.livejournal.com at 08:19am on 25/10/2006
Nice job. Despite several challenges (few words, no dialogue, outsider POV) I thought you did a wonderful job of characterizing Sam, Dean and how they relate to each other and to other people.

One small thing: In the 1st drabble, I think you meant 'customers' not 'costumers'.

Thanks for sharing this enjoyable story.

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