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nekare ([personal profile] nekare) wrote2006-04-02 09:31 pm

April 2nd: Shadows (R/S)

Well aren't I the productive one? I actually like this loads for some strange reason. :) I've a thing for Smitten!Sirius, and I should really write him more often.

Title: Shadows
Rating: PG
Word Count: 563
Summary: Playing with shadows on the ceiling, flirting in the darkness.
Author Notes: Written for [livejournal.com profile] wellymuck's second prompt. Un-betaed.

Day: | 1 | 2 |

(but
true

to the incomparable
couch of death thy
rhythmic
lover


thou answerest

them only with

spring)

- e. e. cummings


The night has fallen, and Remus’ wand is the only source of light in the flat, caught between two cushions on the ground, a bright circle of light in the middle of the ceiling as the first rain of the season echoes from the window.

Remus, sitting with his legs crossed just by his wand, moves his long fingers with his eyes looking up, and the shadows flickering on the ceiling become a duck become a dog become a fable of everything that’s wrong with what Sirius wants (he can almost imagine the dog with a companion, and he bites his lip). Sirius stares at him from the ornament-less couch, dark hair falling over his eyes as he wishes the fingers would create stories over his own skin, to tattoo one plus one equals two on his chest (or on his shoulder?). The dog is eaten by a rabbit, and Sirius rolls his eyes.

One arm stretched out, Sirius makes rude gestures that imprint themselves onto the white ceiling, looking dark and magnified, and Remus swats his hand away while laughing, saying he has no right to defile such an innocent game (and little does he know he wants to defile someone else), and Sirius laughs too, with the vodka he had earlier making his lips shine. “You git,” says Remus, shaking his head. “At least leave some space for me.”

He pushes Sirius on the chest, corners him to the end of the couch with the strength he seldom shows and always contains, and Sirius’ eyes widen as Remus lifts himself up to the couch, laying on his back and taking most of the space as Sirius is pressed tight on his side against the back of the couch, Remus’ throat on his direct line of vision. “Maybe we could have your star painted on the ceiling, Padfoot. Or would that be too tacky?”

“Definitely. We could write ‘Fuck’ in big black letters, though. Would you like that?” Breathe, Sirius tells himself, breathe and this damn torture in closeness will be over soon.

“Nah, it’s been used before.” Remus turns to him, deep shadows over his cheekbones, looking for all intents like the Wolf that has just eaten little Red’s grandma. “I could write ‘Love You’, but I’m sure you won’t like the romanticism.”

Sirius is quite the bright boy, yes, but he’s drank more than half a bottle of vodka (the other part is flowing in Moony’s bloodstream), and his brain just isn’t up for the ride. “What?”

Remus laughs, eyes becoming slits, and gets closer until they’re nose to nose (touching too much and not nearly much enough), presses him to the back of the couch and throws a careless leg on top of Sirius’; and then he just smiles as Sirius’ heart goes too fast for his ribcage to manage, for his thin t-shirt to hold back. He kisses Sirius, sudden and fast and angled, sloppy from the alcohol they both taste like. He pulls apart just a second away of a moan on Sirius’ part, and lifts himself with his elbows, his body stepping on the way of the light and creating a Moony-(heart)shaped figure on the ceiling, head cocked to the side and staring at Sirius.

“Whatever was that?” A breathless voice.

“Spring,” says Remus with a shrug, the corners of his mouth tilted up.

Sirius smiles.

[identity profile] terraneanblues.livejournal.com 2006-04-03 03:01 am (UTC)(link)
Hee! So adorable, darling. I love the idea of things being written on the ceiling, and the shadow game is very very very quickly becoming an obsession of mine... now you've got me wishing i'd come up with it... so jealous! *flails*

[identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com 2006-04-03 03:19 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you, dear! *clutches the shadow game* mine! XDD I'd never thought of that before, actually, and it kinda came out of nowhere. X) Let's see if I can remain as inspired for the rest of the month...
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[identity profile] melandry.livejournal.com 2006-04-03 03:21 am (UTC)(link)
Oh god. The one plus one equals two bit is just a wonderful image/idea. I like this. I dig wolfish Remus who makes the move on Sirius. Remus should be assertive and inscrutable more often.

[identity profile] fiercefragile.livejournal.com 2006-04-03 04:26 am (UTC)(link)
Yay! That is so brilliant, I love it! The shadow games and the one plus one equals two are just so right. Kudos for the aggressive!Remus, as well.

[identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com 2006-04-03 04:40 am (UTC)(link)
I must admit I've a thing for Confident!Remus, because he's always like that in PoA, and well, it's sexy. XD

Thank you so much!

[identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com 2006-04-03 04:41 am (UTC)(link)
Hehe, that line's my favorite too, and I'm so glad you liked it. :)

[identity profile] kyasuriin.livejournal.com 2006-04-03 05:12 am (UTC)(link)

gah. *LOVES* I am definitely a fan of smitten!Sirius as well. I demand he get written more often!!

[identity profile] atlantis-z13.livejournal.com 2006-04-03 10:22 am (UTC)(link)
his brain just isn’t up for the ride. “What?”

i loved this bit! smitten!sirius is adorable!

[identity profile] pezzy387.livejournal.com 2006-04-03 11:44 am (UTC)(link)
*flails* Oh, this is just so cute! And my, is little Remus brave or what? <3 Just the way I like him.

So yeah, this whole wellymuck thing caught me way offguard. I signed on to el jay today and BAM! Two days worth of ficlet. I must catch up after school...
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[identity profile] crooked.livejournal.com 2006-04-03 12:05 pm (UTC)(link)
it's 5:05 am and dammit if i shouldn't be sleeping... but i am so glad i checked my flist before i went to bed! *loves this story and you a lot*

that was just lovely, darling! i have a thing for the use of shadows in fics and this was perfect. i love the simplicity of the ending and how it conveys so much. fabulous!

[identity profile] haltlos.livejournal.com 2006-04-03 02:08 pm (UTC)(link)
*silly smile and feeling happy*

[identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com 2006-04-03 03:37 pm (UTC)(link)
*feels happy for you feeling happy* XD

[identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com 2006-04-03 03:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Haha, I love corrupting other people into staying late XD (I induced it even in myself... I didn't get up early enough to get to school today *shifty eyes*

Yeah, shadows are yummy, aren't they? Thank you so much, hon! I'm especially proud of the ending, so I'm extra happy at your comment. :)

[identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com 2006-04-03 03:40 pm (UTC)(link)
*flails along* Oh yes, our icky little Remus has grown up. *tears* XD Thank you, dear!


Haha, I'm the same, it always makes me happy to have so much to read. *g*

[identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com 2006-04-03 03:44 pm (UTC)(link)
*sucumbs to your demands* Thank you!! Well, I'll have lots of write him in this month. :)

[identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com 2006-04-03 03:44 pm (UTC)(link)
I know! He's just so cute. :) Thanks!

[identity profile] amberlynne.livejournal.com 2006-04-03 07:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh. OH! *claps* I do love it when Sirius is pining and Remus surprises him AND THERE IS NO CRYING BY ME!

Fantastic!
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[identity profile] rosemaryandrue.livejournal.com 2006-04-03 08:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, I do love smitten Sirius, and the shadow game was wonderful. So mysterious and meaningful, and poor Sirius didn't send a chance.

And I agree with what you said further up about Remus' confidence in PoA. I was flicking through it earlier and I love that man. He's so cool in a crisis.

[identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com 2006-04-04 03:27 am (UTC)(link)
Haha, it was meant to be horribly angsty ('cause it's, well, me XD), but I couldn't make myself to break my good mood XDD (The next plot bunny, though...)

Thank you, dear!

Haven't seen you around for some days, how are you?

[identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com 2006-04-04 03:29 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! And of course he didn't, who would resist Moony? XD

I know, he's just so awesome, and not shy at all. Dunno why people write him that way, really.

[identity profile] amberlynne.livejournal.com 2006-04-04 03:31 am (UTC)(link)
Well, I owe your Muse some cookies for leaving out the angst. ;)

Just a bit meh. Haven't had much new to say, except squeeing over Doctor Who. ;)

[identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com 2006-04-04 03:33 am (UTC)(link)
Muse: *munches on cookies*

Hehe, I'm the same. I've had the tune going on and on in my head ALL day long. XD It's just so wonderful.

[identity profile] pumpkin-pantry.livejournal.com 2006-04-04 06:15 am (UTC)(link)
Ahaha this made me smile like a dork all day. Really, I never would have thought of shadow puppets (but its so obvious and AMAZING and you use it soooo well), and Remus...and ...shadow puppets. Oh such love. And as usual, perfect Sirius wanting and amaaaazing Remus acting on his feelings. Making the first move, whoohoo! I love the idea of them painting something on the ceiling, even if it is probably just because they're looking at it and are drunk off their asses. I don't care, its sweet, and Remus knows his boy sooo well. "love you" GAH I just lost it right there XD So sweet, it hurts my cheeks from all this smiling. :)!

[identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com 2006-04-04 08:51 pm (UTC)(link)
And now you've made me hurt for all the smiling. :)) Hehe, the idea of the shadow game came out of nowhere, but then I kinda squeed 'OMG CUTENESS' insdide my head, and went ahead with it. XD Remus deserves some intiative, after all.

Thank you, thank you, thank you. :))) To think you come back to the internet to read my stuff makes me all dizzy with happines. ♥

[identity profile] kasche.livejournal.com 2006-04-05 10:27 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, this was lovely. :D

[identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com 2006-04-05 08:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] pumpkin-pantry.livejournal.com 2006-04-06 05:56 am (UTC)(link)
Smiling is good :) GOOD, I'm glad you did. Its darling XD Remus really does, I wish I would stop making him the blushy girly type.

Hahah you're welcome ^_~ *hug* Of course, I need some cheering up from all this stress, you know.

[identity profile] javajunkie13.livejournal.com 2006-04-11 03:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Guh. Shadow games! And aggressive!Remus! Smitten!Sirius is the way to my heart. I adore him when he's pining. And, the kiss made my stomach flip, what with nervous!Sirius, and the smile and just mmmm. XD Very lovely m'dear.

[identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com 2006-04-11 08:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!! I think we all agree that the world needs some more Smitten!Sirius. Everyone seems to love him!

[identity profile] moonix.livejournal.com 2006-04-12 10:38 am (UTC)(link)
*hides her dirty grin* Oh Sirius, how childish and immature you are! Amused by simple swearwords! Really! ... *has to suffocate a gigglish snort in her sleeve*

Hee, how wonderfully needy and tense they are when they're drunk. And Remus, so bold and daring, and predatory, whoo! Sexy. :3

AND SHADOWPLAY YIPPIE!

[identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com 2006-04-16 04:17 am (UTC)(link)
*giggles along* They're just fun drunks, aren't they? We all kinda love to booze them up XD Remus is actually a sexy beast. He hides it under that bookish facade, but oh, it is there. *g*

THERE SHOULD TOTALLY BE MORE SHADOWPLAY. WORD.

[identity profile] moonix.livejournal.com 2006-04-16 01:06 pm (UTC)(link)
You know, usually I'm rather skeptic when people smoke or get drunk in stories, because I'm just a good girl *g*, but with the pups, it's kinda... I don't know. I imagine Sirius rolling his cigarettes himself, because he'd TOTALLY do that as he'd think it was the absolute height of cool (I mean, it sorta is, and it's just sexyyy), and I see Remus getting sloshed and clinging to Sirius while he brings him home, telling him all kinds of embarrassing secrets, or Sirius being really drunk and trying to seduce Remus, or both of them drunk and aggressive and tense and needing to get laid very very badly... So I'm kinda torn between my health conscience and something that likes these images very much indeed. *g*

OH, TOTALLY. SHADOWPLAY FOR PRESIDENT. OR SOMETHING.

[identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com 2006-04-16 05:05 pm (UTC)(link)
I soooo get you. I hate, hate, HATE, smoking (hell, I usually scold my parents for smoking in front of me...); and yet, with fiction (be it original or fic), practically all of my characters smoke. Because it's sexy, damnit! (and you can't smell it) And completely drunk pups are just completely fun. :) What I do find odd, though, it's how many drug use! fic there is *shrug* that, and the whole 'curry takeaway' that seems to be present in every single pup fic, dunno why (then again, I've never eaten that, so I don't really know what the frenzy is about). Fandom is so weird... And yet we love it.

ARE YOU MAD? DICTATOR, WOMAN, DICTATOR!

[identity profile] moonix.livejournal.com 2006-04-16 05:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Hehe, yes, you can't smell it, that might actually be it. *g* You can even imagine the smell isn't so bad, because they're smoking special cigarettes, haha.

The curry takeaway is, I hear, just TEH most British thing that lives. So it's rather obvious that the pups would, like, do it. :)

WHOOPS RIGHT SORRY NO DEMOCRACY SHADOWPLAY FOR DICTATOR THEN SHADOWPLAY FOR DICTATOR!

[identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com 2006-04-16 06:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Haha, special chocolate flavoured cigarettes!

Really? Well, that explains a lot, I guess. Now I want to try it... (I've only ever had japanese curry. Why, yes, I'm weird.)

SHADOWPLAY SHALL CONQUER THE WORLD WITH ITS AWESOMNESS

[identity profile] moonix.livejournal.com 2006-04-17 02:48 pm (UTC)(link)
You've never had curry? Hmm. But you know the spice, right? And mm, Japanese curry. Was it any good?

[identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com 2006-04-18 06:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, it was great! Now I should try and find an Indian restaurant. Bad thing is, there aren't that many, that I know. T-T *wants to taste teh curry*