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posted by [identity profile] swedish15.livejournal.com at 06:23pm on 29/05/2006
Interesting choice, the present time. And you manage to write detached, which in this scene works wonderfully, 'cause it throws in uncertainity about your character.
Yup, beautiful piece.
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