nekare

Ah, Ale (can I call you that? heh), I really loved this. I read this after just finishing your other story "Rayos X" and to me it seems like a fantastic theme. For example, your idea of using a mermaid that would appear to be a magical story turns out to be a bit haunting, and clearly it haunts Olivia for the rest of her life. I think it woulbe interesting to explore maybe writing a series of stories about other girls who have similar experiences with what is meant to be fantastic, stories of of fantasty and fairytales, but the reality of it that makes it frightening. You know, I don't think I'm making sense.

But anyway, back to my point which was that you should enter this one to competition.