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posted by [identity profile] slowtuesdays.livejournal.com at 03:05am on 13/07/2007
Wow. I really, really liked this. I was immediately invested and interested in the characters - whoever they were - and I was really wanting them together at the end. I think that says a lot about your talent in writing, when I can feel this way about characters that are a part of an original story that's just over 3500 words long.

Just a note for you though, there were a few little spelling mistakes:
- you stumble on the stars outside the elegant apartment; should be "stairs", right?

- he exaggerates the accent in purpose; "on" purpose?

Anyway, this was fablous! I really loved it!
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posted by [identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com at 03:23am on 13/07/2007
Aw, thank you so much. :) I do have a thing for nameless characters, I'm not sure why XD

Argh, holy typos, batman! Thanks for letting me know. I don't think I'd ever translated anything that fast, so it was bound to have lots of mistakes *g*
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posted by [identity profile] slowtuesdays.livejournal.com at 01:31pm on 13/07/2007
I know, I've got a thing for nameless characters too! There's just something that adds to whole mystery of them - especially in this story, where she really has no idea who he is, but we have very little understanding of who she is too. A simple lack of a name can do that - I love that!
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