posted by [identity profile] veronica-rich.livejournal.com at 04:34am on 23/06/2007
It doesn’t keep her from going knee-deep into the water and kicking around, cursing the sea until her temper finally subsides. By then, she’s wet all over and she has sand on most of her body, but she feels a little better.

This has to be my favorite part - it captures the old Elizabeth who wants to throw a tantrum just every so often, but shows she's also capable of learning and patience.

I agree with the other commenter - this has to be one of the best post-AWE fics I've read. You don't have to have major angst and super-seriousness for it to be "deep" and this shows that. Well done indeed.
 
posted by [identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com at 08:31pm on 27/06/2007
I'm so glad someone pointed at that particular part - I do think it represents the way I see Elizabeth. :)

Thank you so much, your comment made me smile big time.

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