posted by [identity profile] moonix.livejournal.com at 12:31pm on 30/12/2005
*whimpers quietly* I have to breathe first... uhnn... hell... I wanted to cry... It's darkbeautifulACHINGlysadHOPELESSlyevocativesosoincrediblyincredibleandmorepainfulthanpainitselfisohwoah.

Your first line is like a slap across the face.

The words you chose are rhythmic and poetic and dark and absolutely crushing. The pictures. The non-pictures, because everything is dipped in darkness, the feelings.

Those little sequences are heart-wrenching.

Hermione screaming when Ron dies, the baby she'll never see again, Harry's goodbye.

So heavy. Rip you away like a fire storm. And yet so quiet, so intense.

Really, I am deeply impressed by this - yes, revolted and moved, but that comes naturally and was probably the intention. I say Damn Good Job and I mean it.

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