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posted by [identity profile] moonix.livejournal.com at 12:31pm on 30/12/2005
*whimpers quietly* I have to breathe first... uhnn... hell... I wanted to cry... It's darkbeautifulACHINGlysadHOPELESSlyevocativesosoincrediblyincredibleandmorepainfulthanpainitselfisohwoah.

Your first line is like a slap across the face.

The words you chose are rhythmic and poetic and dark and absolutely crushing. The pictures. The non-pictures, because everything is dipped in darkness, the feelings.

Those little sequences are heart-wrenching.

Hermione screaming when Ron dies, the baby she'll never see again, Harry's goodbye.

So heavy. Rip you away like a fire storm. And yet so quiet, so intense.

Really, I am deeply impressed by this - yes, revolted and moved, but that comes naturally and was probably the intention. I say Damn Good Job and I mean it.
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posted by [identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com at 07:45pm on 30/12/2005
*blushes* Oh, lord I just adore your comments :)

You won't believe the amount of first lines I tried, and then that one just clicked, and it just hurt my very sould, as it's the first time I've ever killed a character. *smooches Ron*

And yes, revoltion, just what I was aiming for. Actually, your entire comment sums up just what I wanted this to be, so I'm so, so very pleased it came up that way.

And now I'm off to read your latest story, since I didn't have time yesterday!
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posted by [identity profile] moonix.livejournal.com at 09:32am on 31/12/2005
Ah, I know what you mean with the first-line-that-clicked. That's a wonderful experience, isn't it? When you finally feel as though you've got it.

(Ron is sulking, by the way. He's been hiding behind my back for ages and won't come out until he gets a kiss from - what was that, dear? Harry or Hermione? Oh, right, Hermione, of course, yeah, sorry, how could I even think that... haha... *pats*)
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posted by [identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com at 06:04pm on 31/12/2005
Oh, Ron you poor thing. Go on dear, you won't be mauled anymore, I promise. A kiss, you say? Oh, I can arrange that, R/Hr fluff is just what my muse needs this moment, anyway. *pats too*
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posted by [identity profile] moonix.livejournal.com at 06:12pm on 31/12/2005
Ron: Aaaaalriiiight... *slowly crawls out* But only if it's a good kiss. From Hermione. *still afraid that he might get one from harry*
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posted by [identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com at 06:31pm on 31/12/2005
Oh, but Harry/Ron is so hot!

but yeah, Ron/Hermione=OTP
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posted by [identity profile] moonix.livejournal.com at 06:36pm on 31/12/2005
Ron: EEK! (<-- He's in denial. I agree with you, though.)
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posted by [identity profile] moonix.livejournal.com at 06:36pm on 31/12/2005
Maybe we can really go for a threesome... That way, everyone gets what they (secretly) want... And there's no splitting up the trio.
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posted by [identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com at 01:27am on 01/01/2006
Oh, the idea sounds interesting...

and I admit it. I'm guily of reading some threesome porn some time ago (Harry/Hermione squicks me, though.), and well, it was hot.
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posted by [identity profile] moonix.livejournal.com at 02:23pm on 01/01/2006
*GRINS BROADLY*

See. Gotcha.
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