Hurray for the totally unnecessary shirtlessness!. Gen fic: Hold Your Last Breath : comments.
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Harry’s hope died along with Ron.
Perfect. It's just the point of the whole Potterverse: Friendship and family. How much their lifes depend on each others.
This story scared the hell out of me - in a positiv way because it was creepy and heart breaking to read what's destroyed.
I loved your Hermione: brave but human. At least she was just a woman, a mother and a friend. None of them was just a heroic symbol. The trio was *real* not just a fantasy of the wizarding world. Even if they died...
Your writting was awesome. The words were perfectly chosen. Poetic and beautiful.
The secong paragraph about Ginny was one of the best parts because the world seemed to slow down...
I just can't describe it... I still shiver.
Amazing job!!
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And I know, I know, I suffered along with Ron, but if he didn't die Harry wouldn't have gone so far down, 'cause it's exactly the way you put it, they depend on each other. And I was worried if Hermione had come as to much of a whiner, so it's good to know she didn't.
The Ginny part? That's my favorite too XP Thank you!
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You always do! :)
And I was worried if Hermione had come as to much of a whiner, so it's good to know she didn't.
She'd lost her husband so her reaction was just normal I guess. Plus drama queens are better! :P