posted by [identity profile] juliette-kelley.livejournal.com at 05:02am on 20/10/2005
Awwww! :)

“Where’s my glove?” Remus asked trying not to show anger, and to not notice how very much like a muggle movie this all sounded.

This made me laugh out loud! I adore this. Sirius's nervousness was so cute, and the dialogue was wonderful. Great job! :)
 
posted by [identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com at 06:25pm on 20/10/2005
and the dialogue was wonderful.

That's the best compliment you could have given me! I have serious (no pun intended) problems with dialogue, and it's good to know I didn't fail miserably.

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