posted by [identity profile] swedish15.livejournal.com at 10:07pm on 27/05/2006
Here via.. uh.. I think [livejournal.com profile] why_me_why_not linked to you once, and now you're in my start pages. (Which are only 50.)

You want Fight Club? He, that's goooooooood...
Fight Club, the Narrator realizing that Marla is *also* an imagination (at least in the movie, there are hints; for example Marla's visits to a group for testicular cancer), and, in the end, choosing the hallucination, this time. As a colour? Puke-green.
 
posted by [identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com at 05:23pm on 29/05/2006
Oooh, Tabby pimps me out way too much XD This was SO much fun! I should really try someday and write something larger for Fight Club. (And your choice of color? AWESOME.)

That Nasty Thing You Do
Fight Club – Narrator/Marla – The Narrator finding out Marla is an imagination as well – Puke-green – 297 Words

We sit on opposite sides of the room, a leak between us (tip-top-tip-tap goes the water as it falls on the frying pan).

Marla smokes on the bed, staring at me through the grayish smoke, legs open wide and her dress hiked up to her waist – pure wanton look that makes me melt and makes me wish Tyler had never been.

(Because it feels too easy to take advantage now.)

The light bulb had been broken, and the only thing I could find in the old house at Paper Street is this wretched puke-green bulb that lights Marla in a slightly sickening fashion, pure contrast and cutting angles.

“You’re not real,” I say, my hands in my pockets.

Marla laughs, coughs a bit with the smoke. “If you think you know already, why are you asking?” She leans closer to me, blows smoke into my face and my eyes water. I’m not entirely sure how, but I’m standing almost next to the bed now.

Wonderful, more plotholes in my already blank life is just what I need.

Marla throws herself backwards on the bed, stares at the ceiling with her limbs spread open. I poke her shin, and it’s surprisingly corporeal.

“I’m asking because I don’t want to realize I already know.”

She smiles, puts the cigarette out on the dirty sheets, and I almost wish it was my skin so I could feel something, anything, in the way I haven’t felt since Tyler went away.

“Well aren’t you the rhetorical one?”

I smirk, and decide that drowning in my insanity isn’t so much as a bad idea after all.

(Touching her is completely different than touching Tyler, and yet, it’s feels the same at the end. I’m not quite sure if I dislike it or not.)
 
posted by [identity profile] swedish15.livejournal.com at 06:28pm on 29/05/2006
Yes, you surely should write a longer piece for Fight Club. If you do, tell.
(Warning: I've only seen the movie. 8 or 9 times. Never read the book. Always wanted to.)

This? Is great. I can almost hear Edward Norton reciting the monologue, as I can see Helena Bonham-Carter's wrecked Marla sitting, with that certain look in her eyes. Oh, and plotholes commentary? Great. Simply great. AS for the last sentence? Great.

Thank you, thank you, thank you. (Goes to pimp drabble in his LJ)
 
posted by [identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com at 03:18am on 30/05/2006
You might just convince me... Ah, I've always wanted to read the book as well. But alas, it's just not get-able in Mexico...

Wee! I'm so so glad you liked it, and it's good to know it does actually work. And YES you got the plotholes part!! I loved writing that XD

And oh, thanks for the pimping!

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