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So, tonight's drabbles for [livejournal.com profile] queerditch_pub, even when I know I shouldn't be drabbling in there when I have so much things to write. Oh well, it was fun. I'm quite proud of these, actually.

This week's theme was Shakespeare. Both are dark-ish and a tad cruel. Deliciously cruel, I'd like to think, though. XD

One Last Second
Remus/Sirius - "The rest is silence" - 198 words.

Sleep

The word echoes in Remus’ brain, thick and rich on his tongue as still-warm blood. The edges of reality are blurring, curling on themselves and leaving a sepia-colored frame around Sirius’ teary face. The snow beneath him is feeling warmer by the second, his skin becoming as white, blending with it; devoid of color, of hurting, of life.

Remus welcomes it, arms wide open and eyes shutting close languidly. He tries to laugh, but blood spills onto his lips, choking him, drowning him. He smiles, instead, and brings his right hand - the one that he’s still able to move - to his lips. Sirius is crying over him, trying to swallow back the sobs and failing.

Remus wipes his face, and long stripes of blood coat his cheek with Remus’ scarlet-colored life. Bloody tears, a religious fable of old times.

Sleep is calling him, Remus knows, tempting him with this colorful goodbye and one last look at the soon to die blue sky. A bird sings a requiem in his ear, and Sirius’ choked breathing becomes its tempo.

To rest is silence, and no sound can be heard in the snowy clearing as Remus dies slowly.


Kiss Me Goodbye
Harry/Draco - "Ophelia floats with violets twined in her hair" - 227 Words.

Ophelia floated with violets twined in her hair, long blond locks moving with the circular waves of a tear falling in the water, forget-me-nots resting by her hands and the blue, blue sky reflecting in her unseeing eyes.

She died, sweet on her tongue and madness in her heart; and Harry thinks it is only fair he grants Draco the same death as he persues him across Denmark. There’s poison on Harry’s lips the last time he kisses him, sultry and slow, and the bezoar in his stomach feels heavy as Draco’s eyes roll back into his head, lips still swollen and red in his too pale face.

The river he chooses is as still as a mirror, and as he lays Draco in the freezing water his eyes open slightly. He pants, confused, paralyzed, and Harry smiles sweetly at him as he caresses his forehead with one hand, and keeps Draco’s head above the water with the other. He showers Draco with petals, a thousand colors tainting with too late life the Death Eater robes and a blood red rose is tucked into his now-empty wand pocket.

Harry puts a finger to Draco’s trembling lips, and drinks from the veiled terror in his eyes. He blows him a kiss, a smile, death wrapped in innocent looking paper.

Forget me not, Harry says, and lets him drown.
Music:: Zoé - Microscopio
Mood:: 'creative' creative
There are 13 comments on this entry. (Reply.)
 
posted by [identity profile] pumpkin-pantry.livejournal.com at 04:50am on 09/01/2006
God I love you, you always make me...really sad...but in a good way. AND you always have me crying right before I go to bed! Ahaha XD Lovely drabbles, both of them are so crystal clear it burns.
 
posted by [identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com at 05:00am on 09/01/2006
Ah, but it's always good having a good cry before going to bed! XD

Thanks so much, dear!
 
posted by [identity profile] zurizip.livejournal.com at 07:10am on 09/01/2006
*jaw goes drop*
Dude. Kiss me Goodbye is really. fucking. amazing.
just. dude.
One Last second is good too, but ... wow.
 
posted by [identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com at 09:34pm on 09/01/2006
I know, I'm especially proud of that one as well XD

And that just shows how utterly obsessed I am with Ophelia's death. I was the one who gave that promt. ;P

Thanks!
 
posted by [identity profile] haltlos.livejournal.com at 03:38pm on 09/01/2006
These are just heartbreaking!
Great job, hun. :)
 
posted by [identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com at 09:52pm on 09/01/2006
Thanks so much!
 
posted by [identity profile] moonix.livejournal.com at 05:04pm on 09/01/2006
...

Oh how you kill me girl.

SHITOHWOAH. Those were INCREDIBLE. INCREDIBLE.
 
posted by [identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com at 09:53pm on 09/01/2006
Oh, thanks so much!

These were just so easy to write. *sigh* My series is eating me alive.
 
posted by [identity profile] moonix.livejournal.com at 06:16pm on 10/01/2006
I so know what you mean. I couldn't write longer stories if my life depended on it. *sighs* Says the one who dreams of being a writer one day HA

But really, they haunted me. I love every sentence and what you made of the quotes and I'm still so overwhelmed I can't tell you why. Maybe it's because I just feel your passion for writing in them, maybe because I feel your passion for those characters, for colours, for emotions. Gah, this sounds stupid. Sorry. ^^
 
posted by [identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com at 09:01pm on 10/01/2006
hehe, me too. :) *has two novels started, none with more than 10 pages*

Ugh, you make blush. And smile. both.

Thing is, I've been obsessed with Ophelia's death for ages and ages. Been trying to draw it too, but I'm still not talented enough to make it work. One day, though...
 
posted by [identity profile] moonix.livejournal.com at 05:40pm on 11/01/2006
And we called Lupin's ship the Ophelia, how very fitting XD
ext_7717: Lilian heart (Poison Prince by me)
posted by [identity profile] lilian-cho.livejournal.com at 11:17pm on 01/01/2007
Aww :-(

*sniffs*

*lifts Draco up and folds him in nice pretty sheets*
 
posted by [identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com at 01:13am on 02/01/2007
*giggle*

Draco: *purrs amidst all those nice sheets*

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