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posted by [personal profile] nekare at 07:18pm on 03/07/2006 under , , , ,
Written for Day 1 (Warm Stones) and Day 3 at [livejournal.com profile] dogdaysofsummer.

Eat Me Up
Remus/Sirius – Warm stones – Breakfast – 248 Words

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You’re going to die young if you keep on eating like that, says Sirius without meaning it on the third of July, sipping on his coffee slowly as Remus wolfs down the heavy meal – beans on toast, yolk all over them, and as he sucks his fingers clean Sirius reminds himself that’s not something one should be mildly attracted too.

Remus doesn’t listen to him, doesn’t even look at him until he’s finished with his meal and his too fast metabolism sets on dissolving anything that touches his stomach, perpetually leaving him hungry. Sirius reckons that’s the reason Remus is always starving for attention, for recognition, only he has learned to bury the ache beneath his skin.

Sirius is sitting on the back of his couch, feet over the purple cushions James got him as a joke and he decided to keep as defiance. His cup is balancing precariously on his left knee, the heat traveling down his leg the same as his blood travels to his face when Remus looks at him as if he could use him as dessert.

Were you saying something? asks Remus after a few moments of silence, as he lights a cigarette (because he knows Sirius likes it when he smokes, knows it makes his head spin and his breath quicken) and takes out from his pocket the little stone that he found on the beach three years ago and that he keeps playing with, the one that Sirius imagines must be warm from the summer in Remus’ mind and the body that it’s always pressed against.

I said, would you like to share some pudding. It doesn’t sound like a question, because Sirius already knows the answer.
There are 33 comments on this entry. (Reply.)
 
posted by [identity profile] amberlynne.livejournal.com at 12:32am on 04/07/2006
Oh, yum. *g* Remus makes an excellent tease. Very nice! ;)
 
posted by [identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com at 12:35am on 04/07/2006
I don't know why I always picture him that way XD Thanks!
 
posted by [identity profile] magnetic-pole.livejournal.com at 12:33am on 04/07/2006
Oh! So lovely and physical/concrete and moody! Maggie
 
posted by [identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com at 12:35am on 04/07/2006
Aw, thanks a lot. :)
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posted by [identity profile] melandry.livejournal.com at 12:51am on 04/07/2006
Nice. My favorite bit is the part about the cup of tea - what a perfect way to describe the heat of a flushed face!
 
posted by [identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com at 12:55am on 04/07/2006
Haha, I really like that part as well. Thanks, hon!
 
posted by [identity profile] littlecup.livejournal.com at 12:51am on 04/07/2006
Heee! Oh, Remus is just delicious here. XD! Love it.
 
posted by [identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com at 12:56am on 04/07/2006
Oh, thanks so much!
 
posted by [identity profile] bnh.livejournal.com at 12:54am on 04/07/2006
oh remus. oh sirius. this is lovely.
 
posted by [identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com at 12:56am on 04/07/2006
Thanks so much!
 
posted by [identity profile] schwarzbrille.livejournal.com at 01:37am on 04/07/2006
Remus smoking slays me EVERY. TIME. So yeah, I feel Sirius' lust pain. XD

Lovely piece, as always, and from such a relatively unlovely prompt. :D Well done!
 
posted by [identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com at 01:42am on 04/07/2006
Haha, I know, it's just too sexy - and this coming from the girl that keeps on hiding her parent's cigarettes XD

Thanks, dear!
 
posted by [identity profile] expositionary.livejournal.com at 02:10am on 04/07/2006
Oh, Remus. ;)And oh, Sirius, who thinks that every single thing that Remus does is sexy. ♥ Not that I don't...

I love this. And I love the way you wrap up those "food" metaphors into everything and somehow still manage to make it lovely.
 
posted by [identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com at 03:22am on 04/07/2006
Remus is a sexy beast, it just can't be avoided, really XD

Oh, thanks! I actually had to change a lot, because the food part sounded too unsexy at the beginning *g*
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posted by [identity profile] crooked.livejournal.com at 02:20am on 04/07/2006
just fantastic, love! why is smoking hot when they do it but not so much on others? anyway, ♥ as always! so glad to see you participating! :D
 
posted by [identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com at 03:23am on 04/07/2006
Ugh, tell me about it - I actually sometimes hide my parent's cigarettes. I hate smokin, and yet...

I haven't been able to read your story yet ;-; I'll read it first thing in the morning.
ext_41195: ([sbp] Remus Smoking // me)
posted by [identity profile] crooked.livejournal.com at 03:57am on 04/07/2006
and yet it's ohsohot on pretty boys. yes, i hate smoking, too. XD

oh, psssh. don't worry about my story. it's not going anywhere and it's crap so blah. ;P
 
posted by [identity profile] pezzy387.livejournal.com at 04:50am on 04/07/2006
Oh lovely! This is the most wonderful kind of Remus. And I love when people write R/S and take Sirius out of the spotlight. He gets far too accustomed to being there... ;)
 
posted by [identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com at 05:13pm on 04/07/2006
Oh yes, Remus definitly needs all that attention XD Thanks, dear!
 
posted by [identity profile] onehundredmoons.livejournal.com at 06:11am on 04/07/2006
Fantastic! Pudding, indeed! ;)
 
posted by [identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com at 05:27pm on 04/07/2006
Hehe, thanks!
 
posted by [identity profile] centricity.livejournal.com at 08:25am on 04/07/2006
feet over the purple cushions James got him as a joke and he decided to keep as defiance

This made me grin. I like the idea of the James/Sirius (that is, James and Sirius) dynamic being inordinately snarky in nature, in the most non-verbal of ways.
 
posted by [identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com at 05:29pm on 04/07/2006
Haha, definitely, I can see James mocking Sirius with all those little things. Thank you!
 
posted by [identity profile] javajunkie13.livejournal.com at 01:46pm on 04/07/2006
Mmmm, lovely. :D I adore smitten!Sirius and tease!Remus, what a perfect combination. I especially love: the heat traveling down his leg the same as his blood travels to his face when Remus looks at him as if he could use him as dessert what a perfect description of it. Fabulous, darling. ♥
 
posted by [identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com at 05:33pm on 04/07/2006
Oh, thanks, hon! I must admit I have a bit of a thing for Smitten!Sirius - he's just too cute for words XD
 
posted by [identity profile] sazzlette.livejournal.com at 03:49pm on 04/07/2006
I'd have Sirius for pudding any day. Meow.

;D

Lovely, delightful story :3

Sirius reckons that’s the reason Remus is always starving for attention, for recognition, only he has learned to bury the ache beneath his skin.

That made me wibble :/ ♥
 
posted by [identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com at 05:34pm on 04/07/2006
Who wouldn't? Yum. *ponders licking Sirius*

Eee, thanks, hon. :))
 
posted by [identity profile] moonix.livejournal.com at 05:51pm on 04/07/2006
Heeeeeee. Oh, Sirius. ^^ *huggles him* So cute! :D
 
posted by [identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com at 07:07pm on 04/07/2006
Oh he is cute. Too cute, in fact. *huggles him too*

Thanks, dear. :)
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posted by [personal profile] such_heights at 08:07pm on 04/07/2006
Oh, I am utterly charmed by this!
 
posted by [identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com at 08:20pm on 04/07/2006
Eee, I'm so glad you are. Thanks!
 
posted by [identity profile] onadancefloor.livejournal.com at 06:39am on 05/07/2006
I don't like smoking, but Remus just seems positively sexy doing it. I really liked this one.

Sirius reckons that’s the reason Remus is always starving for attention, for recognition, only he has learned to bury the ache beneath his skin.

That line is perfect, made me ache just a little inside.
 
posted by [identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com at 06:46pm on 05/07/2006
I don't either! Surprising, I know, but they're fiction and therefore immune to smoking XD

Thanks, hon! That's my Remus in the flesh, so it's nice to see it worked out well. :)

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